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Grip

July 22, 2020 By Ellen

The fact I’ve written something that looks like a poem doesn’t make me into a poet. Nope. It is only because I’m a woman with words inside her that won’t stop themselves trying to escape – however badly they manifest.

 

You don’t need to hold on so tight

It’s true, your air-tight fist is unprisable

Proud of never letting go

But look

If your knuckles are white and the veins bulge, what’s going on?

Turn over your hand for a moment and you’ll see

A palm-sweat lagoon of sunken wreckage

It doesn’t matter if it’s the iridescent wings of a moth

Or eggshell hopes

They’ll be crushed all the same

Forever

 

Photo by @judebeck on Unsplash

Filed Under: Uncategorized Tagged With: on my mind, poem, writing

Comments

  1. Jeannie Mackenzie says

    July 22, 2020 at 8:38 am

    8:20am

    You ARE a poet
    Tho you may not know it

    I understand poetry to be the condensation of ideas, emotions and dreams in so few words that the reader or listener has to actively engage with the text and is tugged powerfully into a sea of meaning which is both broader and deeper than the letter on the page and whose currents may take the reader so far they adrift they forgot to eat their breakfast.

    Please write more poetry.

    • Ellen Arnison says

      July 22, 2020 at 1:30 pm

      That’s very kind, Jeannie. You may find yourself awash…

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