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The gift – 100 words

April 26, 2023 By Ellen

The gift

A present is hope

in thoughtfully chosen and expensive paper,

(to be folded with equal thought for later, but never used)

sharp folds and Sellotape hidden as if it was vulgar.

Untied in slow motion to stretch the moment –

the thought that counts –

rolled the ribbons around your hand,

tidy.

I hope you like it: it’s not much

You organised yourself for surprise,

delight and an authentic positive response.

I love it: it’s just what I need

as you made space for disappointment

and reproach about expecting too much.

No wonder it’s hard to live in the present.

 

Photo by Ekaterina Shevchenko on Unsplash

Filed Under: 365, 365 photos, other things I have learned, review Tagged With: 100 words, 2023 challenge, creative writing, expectation, gift, hope, metaphor, writing

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