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Carriage E – 100 words

April 27, 2023 By Ellen

Carriage E

There’s a couple in seats E27 and 28

no luggage, not even a coat.

Holding hands like they are ready to jump,

Round-eyed, they monitor snack-scoffing

netflixers and double-chinned snoozers.

She gets out a phone and he looks at her

until her mouth makes an O. She switches it off.

They don’t speak: there’s no need.

They will always be connected by the blood

that startled and spurted

when she lunged

and the way he knew exactly what to do.

‘It’s not your fault, babe,’ he said has he hunted for bleach

‘He was never the right man for you.’

 

This is, of course, a work of fiction

Photo by Marios Gkortsilas on Unsplash

Filed Under: 365, 365 photos, other things I have learned, review Tagged With: 100 words, 2023 challenge, creative writing, flash fiction, murder, story

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