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Caged by a metaphor – 100 words

May 6, 2023 By Ellen

Caged by a metaphor

 

Hard-baked stone formed by

an eruption of fire and fury and

petrified by terror

 

A moat of stinking slime patrolled

by armoured reptiles with teeth

like broken bar-brawl bottles

 

Dense thorn-sharp tangles woven

tight protecting soft, pale tenderness

as it sleeps its life away

 

A carapace of mirrors returning little

pictures of the faces it encounters

deflecting reflections of misdirection

 

Maybe I can find an end in the blanket

that I wove with threads of

discomfort and sophisticated golden strands

so I can unravel…

 

Chip away, scythe down, mop up and tame

so much metaphor: such hard work

my liberation

Filed Under: 365, 365 photos, other things I have learned, review Tagged With: 100 words, 2023 challenge, creative writing, feelings, metaphor

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